英语日记关于日常生活,创业者的日常生活


英语日记关于日常生活,创业者的日常生活

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六、书面表达(本题共20 分)
如果你是中学生李华,在你班学习的交换生彼得,看了你发布的朋友圈,他对上周你班开的班会很感兴趣 。请根据以下信息给他写一封信,介绍他参加班会,和他谈谈中学生如何减轻备考压力 。
写作要点
1.班会内容:如何自信考试
2.和几个同学介绍一下你的想法:
(1)王红:学好各科;
(2)赵凯:做好复习计划;
(3)你:减轻备考压力 。
3.谈谈中学生如何减轻备考压力?
【英语日记关于日常生活,创业者的日常生活】写作要求
1.不要使用真实姓名和学校名称 。
2.可以适当增加细节,丰富内容,使文笔连贯 。
3.字迹工整,语言简洁,表达准确,条理清晰 。
4.至少80字 。
/>Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua


书面表达参考答案
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to tell you something about the class meeting held last week. In the meeting, we mainly talked about how to gain confidence in exams. Wang Hong believed that only when all subjects had been learned well could he get enough confidence. Zhao Kai, however, attached more importance to making good preparations. As for me, spending time thinking about how to reduce the pressure of exams matters more.
Actually, there are many effective ways of reducing pressure. First, we should keep a balance between study and life. That is to say, we should always spend some time relaxing ourselves. Second, we have to communicate our anxiety with others, no matter they our classmates, our parents or even strangers. Speaking out your problems means you are already half way to success.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua


讲评部分


本篇作文,整体难度不大,减轻压力的话题也是平时必须准备的题目 。总体难度还可以 。但是有一些表达,同学们可以学着优化一下 。


1. 充满信心,同学们不要想着用be full of confidence, 实际上由于语言表达的不同,本句跟be full of其实没多大关系 。就用have confidence in 就可以了 。


2. 几个同学平行并列表达看法的时候,同学们容易写成流水账 。A说完,B说,然后C说 。我的范文用用however表示A和B两个人的对比,然后用as for因此C 。这样连贯性上更灵活一些 。


3. 至于减轻压力,这个话题的常见表达有很多 。比如:
relax our body and refresh our mind放松身心
improve the efficiency of study提高学习效率
all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 谚语
等等都可以,注意平时积累 。
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作者:王兴刚老师,前高校英语教师,现教育行业创业者,英语教学16年 。本头条的日常推文主要包括:关于教育问题的理解与感悟,关于英语知识的梳理和剖析,关于英语考点的讲解与总结 。觉得这篇文章专业、有价值,请转发吧!